Evaluation
I think that the pitch went incredibly well and ended with our film being commissioned. In the end we didn't agree on using just one of our film ideas instead we combined the four so that it contained elements of all of our films.
While we pitched our idea Mr Hood gave us pros and cons on our film idea so that we could then input new ideas to make our film even better. He suggested that we should have a more in-depth storyline, so instead of one twist maybe try and have several. He suggested that to go with him being with a women it should also imply that he was with her to help get an engagement ring. But to pull this off we would need very good actors to help add more emotion to the scenes because words wouldn't be enough to get the storyline that we want across.
Also Mr Hood suggested that we use our own sound effects this year instead of using the pre-recorded ones on the sound editor because we didn't use our own last year.
